“Whispers in the Quiet: A Presence in the Basement”

Rayna Edir
5 min readSep 17, 2024

The wind outside has been battering the windows for hours, a storm I knew was coming but still took me by surprise with its force. It’s the kind of night that makes you feel small, wrapped up in layers of sweaters and blankets but still unable to shake the chill that seeps into your bones. I’m sitting at the kitchen table, staring at a pile of bills I can’t quite bring myself to open yet, my fingers tracing the edges of the envelopes. The house is quiet, save for the steady hum of the furnace that’s working hard but not quite hard enough.

The woman in the basement has been on my mind again. It’s been months since I last heard her — a distant, soft whisper that floated up through the vent in my room one night last summer. I had almost convinced myself she was a figment of my imagination, a stress-induced hallucination from the endless days of trying to hold it all together. But my daughter heard her too, once. That was enough to keep me from dismissing her entirely.

The snowstorm rattles the windows again, and I pull my cardigan tighter around myself, glancing out at the white haze beyond the glass. The kids are upstairs, tucked away in their rooms. My son is likely playing some game, headphones on, lost in his world of screens and controllers. My daughter is spending the evening with friends, her absence making the house feel even…

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Rayna Edir

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